Dear Sir Jee

i am inderjit Sharma. I belong Amritsar. I am working in HDFC BANK in RIC DEPARTMENT. my daily work loans file investigation and catching the fake Doucement in last 7 years.Pervious five year working in ICICI BANK same job profile.

Thanks for the support Sir. I never felt that you are criticizing me by any of your comments. Instead I feel, coz they show me the steps of improvement that I can use in my future articles. I’m seriously grateful to you for providing such support. I noticed the points that you mentioned in the other blog. I’m trying to work on it. The only problem I’m facing is I can’t figure out how to go about it.
I’m listing all such complex terms so that any other analyst can make sense out of it. In the end, I mention my advise that can be used by any layman.
I’ve been writing articles that can be useful for both analysts and investors. But I think I can only write about any one of them. I’m still not clear how, but know have to work on it. If you have any ideas or suggestions, please let me know.
Thanks a lot.

Regards
Rohan

No hard feeling my Dear friend.
I understand you are a gem with all such credible decorations i.e. PG in Finance, IT grad, MBA(Tech)..WOW!
Never ever read me as if I am criticizing you.
In fact all my life I avoided mathematics. Until my little daughter (when she was a kid) failed in Maths and Computers. I prepared myself afresh and tried to keep pace with all that you have ease and expertise..
I was reacted the way, people like me, who may become your fans and admirers one day, may appreciate if you transform your expression for them. I all meant, you should write for such idiots like me.
To explain my point, soon I will key down one post on your subjects..
But trust me, Rohan I value you both as an financial analyst and as an expert absolutely..
With best compliments,
Ashok

Thanks for the review & feedback!
I try to make my articles look simple but the subject that I’m writing about, forces me to use such language.
I’ll still try and incorporate all your suggestions.

This one was not very interesting. It appears you presumed that all the readers know finances well. I request you to revise it. A common man need some explanations first. Sort of introduction on what you are going to tell about which and why?
Still I earnestly think that you should review your article keeping in mind the visitors who find mathematics and statistical graphs hard to understand.
And please don’t take it as a criticism. I value your work. What I mean to say it should not be straining.Otherwise great effort. Ab Saaray loge to hamaray jaisay mand buddhi nahin hain..kuchch log in baaton ko aasanee say samajh saktay hain.
God Bless You.